Angel of Death

Hey there! It was the day and it was dreadful day. This could be a great hook, but the repetition of the word 'day' messes everything up. Sometimes it's easy ...

Hmm, I'm going to have to say A Rush of Blood to the Head by Coldplay. But really anything by Coldplay, whenever I'm writing I listen to their music and ...

Hey Holly! Wow, this was really really beautiful. But while I grew, the world grew. I watched the clouds—with their soft chameleon underbellies—crawl up the sky, day after day. And ...

Hey Kamas! First off, this was really really beautiful. It's catchy and I can see this being a nursery rhyme or something. It's sad but hey, look at Ring Around ...

Hello Ky! Haven't read anything by you in a while. The Elephant Keeper! Is this a sequel to The Elephant Boy? If it is, shame on you for not telling ...

Hello there! Welcome to YWS, I'm Angel of Death, but please call me Angel. First off, polls are not a good way to attract readers. People usually see them and ...

Hey Texan! Wow, this is really beautiful. I like it. It sorta reminds of this song I like by Lovers and Liars. I agree that you should write a story ...

Hallo Ash! So glad to be reading this chapter! I didn't read the review before mine, so sorry if I repeat anything. My attempt at nonchalance was wasted. It was ...

Hey Sunny! First off, I have to say that I love the title. It reminds me of one of my favorite songs by Dashboard Confessional. The trees whispered to each ...

Hey there! I'm Angel of Death, but please call me Angel. I don't think I've seen you around here, so welcome to YWS!! IT WAS THE FIRST TIME I SAW ...

Bonjour Ash! “Wow, I really wasn’t expecting this. After you practically ran screaming from me in the woods, I finally got the drift that you didn’t care for me . ...

'Ello there, Mandorelute! Haven't seen you around here, so you must be new. If you aren't, then I apologize but Welcome to YWS. I'm Angel of Death but please just ...

Hey KJ!!! I don't really have a long nit-picky review today. This was really good. And I really like Wren (which you already know.) Her instincts and the way she ...

Hey KJ! I didn't read the other reviews, but hopefully this one will be helpful. I apologize if I repeat anything! The blood on the floor continued to flow down ...

Hello again! Well, I didn't find anything to nitpick over in this chapter. It's always sad to hear that Becca and Vick's relationship isn't working out. I hope to hear ...